What is wrong with the text below?
The biggest reason for insisting that international marketing has many bad sides is because it has a power of command which is very powerful. It could be reached everywhere and it means that every single people in the world easily being a target without concious.
Some errors are very obvious but there are also a few ways to improve it. Have a listen to discover how, and in the process learn:
How and when to use idiomatic expressions
Why a simple argument is better than a complex one
When to use a well known phrase
If it is OK to translate from your native language into English
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