Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection hould humans adapt to technology or should technology adapt to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.”
Whether people should follow the advances of technology or technology should follow the human’s needs has grown in importance over the last few decades. I believe that technology should adapt to the people’s need in other to develop the intelligence. This essay will illustrate these benefits along with examples from the University of Moscow and from the Biotechnological Institute of Rio de Janeiro to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
Primarily, technologies exist to safe and protect human’s life. It is because, with the advance of technology, the way that people live has improves exponentially and it has helped many profession fields such as medicine, art and education. Recent studies by the Biotechnological Institute of Rio de Janeiro have shown that from the past five years 125 vaccines were invented in regard to the innovative equipment used for the researches. Therefore, if the technologic innovations were not presented in our society it is clear that many diseases would be still without a cure.
Additionally, digital innovations have leveraged the children’s learning process. Although some people argue that nowadays, students are not proactive in relation to search for informations, it is clear that with the advances of internet and smartphones, adolescents have been exposed to more data and consequently it has helped them to obtain more knowledge. A recent survey in the University of Moscow has indicated that 55% of the students have learned, the total subject of the annual course, in the first semester.
To conclude, people should encourage the innovation of technology in other to improve their lives and enhance their intelligence level.
“You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are:
1) Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired.
2) Your energy and enthusiasm for the job.
3) Your past experience in a similar position.”
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is George Lincoln and I am writing in response to adverse to the Software Engineer, in your company’s site. I am interested to work for Altran IT Solutions because it is a pioneer IT company in the area of clouding computation.
Firstly, I would like to describe some abilities and knowledge that should be valuable inside company. I am nine-year’ experience programmer with focus on desktop applications. Since your company has launch month a mobile app for android and iPhone platforms, I have wondered whether your desktop app is under development or the company is looking for some people specialize in this kind of work. I am anxious to work as a developer in Altran IT Solutions. I have been following your company since my graduation course and I have been imagining myself in your team since now.
Lastly, I have been working as Developer in a company specialized in VoiceMail the last five years. Many features I have created which help to improve my programming skills. Now I feel myself confident to code in whatever programming language.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
George Linc
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