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The way marketing is practiced is changing all over the world nowadays. This is because international companies are becoming the leaders of trading in almost every country. Therefore, it has been always an area of debate whether international marketing is beneficial for countries or not. In my opinion, overseas marketing has a good impact on nations in many aspects. In this essay i will try to explore some reasons supporting my opinion.
Firstly, international trading helps enriching the culture of countries. This is evident from the fact that people with many different cultural backgrounds will mix with the original people in the country. Thus they can share a lot of ideas and skills with the native residents. For example, they can help in spreading a new language that will indeed add to the treasure of culture any community has.
Secondly, countries can benefit from the job offers provided by international marketing companies. This will in turn result in less unemployment rates and eventually will lead to a more stable and wealthy society. A clear example demonstrating this fact is seen in Malaysia where the unemployment rate is very low compared to other neighbor countries. The most important reason behind reaching this low rate in Malaysia is the widespread of international companies there with a lot of job vacancies filled by local people.
In conclusion, international marketing has many advantages that will not only lead to better employment but also more cultural strengthening and diversity. Therefore countries should always consider providing a favorable set up for international companies in order to attract them.
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Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection The role of globalization is believed to be essential towards a country’s economy and culture development. However, some think that the host country is being encroached upon. In my opinion, international marketing brings more benefits than harm towards the country in questions.
An important aspect of globalization is that it improves a local nation’s economy and technology. This is to say, international marketing has led some global corporations to contribute towards the local community by establishing a factory. Therefore, not only will there be more opportunity for employment, the advanced technology of another country will also be imported. The new equipment, skills and job vacancies are in the local society best interest.
Furthermore, a country’s culture and language could be spread worldwide through globalization. For instance, if a Hollywood movie that is being promoted internationally, focuses on America’s culture, more people will get the opportunity to learn about America’s past achievements. Other than that, the language of the country could also be expanded when singers from different country collaborate for a song. In this way, the music industry of those countries may also consequently evolve.
On the other hand, a convincing argument about international marketing leading a country to lose its distinct characteristic has also been made. The current generation, especially teenagers are often engrossed in foreign brands, and thus, losing interest towards local products. As a result of international corporations’ intrusion, local businesses are forced to close down. Those shops that specialize in upholding traditional skills and artwork will also be out of business which leads to the grave of the long-establish culture.
In conclusion, despite international marketing having some adverse effect on local market and culture, I concede that the benefits that it brings towards the economy and culture of the host country outweigh the disadvantages.
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The beginning of 21st Century, has revolutionzed the conventional ways of trading. This is nowhere more evident than exchange of products within countries. According to some, this idea seems intervening into some country’s territory, however, others refute this. These points of view will be discussed before coming to a reasonable conclusion.
It is felt by some that International marketing is a serious threat to local products, because it leads to more unemployment. Take USA, for instance, where the president Donald Trump has imposed sanctions on foreign markets, in order to provide more job opportunities to native people. This shows the idea of International market is vulnerable to a country’s employment.
On the other hand, some believe multicultural experience plays a vital role in developing relationships worldwide. For example, many online stores in China, particularly ‘Ali baba’ has one of the fastest growing networks worldwide, because it is promoting the Chinese traditional products, which were never accessible before in such a large variety. This shows how a single network can help people to know about other countries techniques and ways of manufacturing. Following this example, it is quite understandable why some people support this idea.
After analyzing these two points of view, it has been concluded that, the pros in support of international marketing are more than its cons. Therefore it is beneficial to share cultural lifestyles among nations through marketing .Furthermore, it is expected that this idea will help in obsoleting the differences between nations and people.
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Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, due to total globalization, learning foreign languages became a necessity rather than an option, and understanding of a written text is one of the components of language ability. Whereas some linguists believe that learning new vocabulary is a way to improve reading, others are confident that active language skills, such as writing as speaking, are more valuable for that purpose.
Learning new words is an important part of improving reading skills, since it is critical in order to be able to understand more complex texts. However, it is difficult to learn separate words and phrases due to the fact that the human brain doesn’t really remember words that are not associated with a situation or an image, so all the new words should be learned in a context. Therefore, if students read a lot and memorize all new words from a text they are studying, they can improve their reading skills and the overall level of language, thus allowing themselves to understand more complex texts.
On the other hand, active language skills such as writing and speaking are more difficult to master than the passive ones, so if a person is able to write about a certain topic, then it will be easy for that person to read and understand a text about it. At the same time, gaining control over speaking and writing is easier than reading, and reading can be considered a prior stage to those active skills. So, reading is really an instrument to improving writing and speaking, and doing it the other way seems not too time-efficient.
To summarize, while speaking and writing can be used to improve reading comprehension, mastering them requires more time than reading, therefore, this approach is not time-efficient. I strongly believe that learning new vocabulary is a better way to improve reading, but only if we learn the words in a context.
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Some argue that international marketing it is an easy way to disseminate new thoughts also a cheap way to learn about culture and language, others believe that is to aggressive way. This essay will discuss both views.
Many people around the world are being target for marketing, through social media, email and even phone. Moreover, this people felt that their privacy does not belong to themselves anymore, with calls coming from all around the world, could cause a little discomfort, this kind of intrusion most of the time let the population wondering about their privacy been espoused, especially worldwide. A researched from Harvard dated of 2014, showed that 60% of the interviewed people hang up when realised that the call they are came from overseas marketing business and it is not to promote a local business.
On the other hand, some believe that it is the marketing jobs to promote and spread the information worldwide. They believe that most of the advanced results we have achieved, were just achieved because it was disseminated around the world and got in to the right hands in the right time, which would be impossible if wasn’t for the international marketing. It is the success case of Hyperloop, a global competition launched to develop a faster train in 2013, which have been gathering participants from all around the world, thru marketing campaign over the social media and in just one year the project had more than 5000 projects were subscribed to participate.
In summary, international marketing could be invasive some times, but it is also necessary, to spread information and knowledge, the world population must be used to it and be prepared as it could be just the beginning.
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In this present world of globalisation, global marketing is a common phenomenon some people stay
against this by saying that it is overstepping into a nation while others favour the situation by highlighting the positive outcomes.In my point of view,overseas business will definitely promote all aspects of human life positively.
Firstly,through international relationships the nation can make friendship and it will indirectly helps in exporting products.Global exportation of products act as a catalyst to improve the economy of the country.For example,India is rich in spices and by exporting high quality spices,the government is acquiring vast amounts of money.
Secondly,people have the opportunity to travel a lot with business in abroad.Thus they can learn new culture and ideas which can be imparted to the home country.For instance,many western citizens are adopting traditional skills like “yoga ” from Asian countries.
On the flip side,while engaging in international marketing in long term basis,there is a chance of losing the identity of a single nation.Many traditional skills and culture may get vanished.This can be supported by considering the state of a Christian country like Italy. Due to high rate of migration,the religious beliefs of people got altered.
To conclude,even though global business has some negative effects on the home country,I think it’s advantages always outweigh disadvantages.
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For the last century the pace of urbanization has drastically increased. Growing megalopolises attract millions of citizens and cause severe natural damage through carbon dioxide emissions. Perhaps the key reason for this is Individuals and manufacturers who are strongly depend on fossil fuels. This essay will consider an economical reason and suggest possible solutions using examples from the real world.
Unfortunately obsolete technologies are financially beneficial to users, although they could deteriorate the quality of air or poison a neighbour soil. Moreover, cleantech usually requires sufficient investments and a change in habits and current way of work. For instance, hardly any producer would desire to decrease waste introducing new equipment, until this action positively impacted the company’s bottom line. The majority of manufacturers and individuals reportedly continue to prefer ordinary cars to those with hybrid engines due the price.
The logical solution to the problem could be financial incentives and fines. There are countless examples of positive results from the penalties on dirty and obsolete technologies. Corporations, at large, are quick to react, when their profits are endangered. In addition, individual consumers should not be forgotten. For example, governmental bodies could offer extra discounts to the people who buy hybrid cars. The equal price for Toyota Prius and Corolla would probably stimulate the preference towards the first model leading to less environmental damage.
To conclude, the tough reliance on fossil fuels leads to problems with pollution. Costly clean technologies forces corporations and households to be reluctant to new ecological innovations. The obvious response to the issue lies in the same, economical, sphere i.e. financial incentives and fines.
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Some language experts believe that lexicon resources are principle parameters for betterment of reading apprehension. While a part of experts opine that strong forte in writing and speaking is much more essential. When a person tends to align towards advanced level of reading then I think that acquisition of words list certainly helps, as compared to the other skills.
To commence with, to enhance reading ability understanding of words is substantial which comes with word stock. In can be stated as that to read effectively one ought to know about the meaning of sentence which comes with cognition of word family and grammar structure. To illustrate, if someone starts reading newspaper “Economic Times” then he or she should be owing long word list and to grasp it fast, person should be familiar with the words instead of referring thesaurus at every sentence and such familiarity comes with learning. In today’s era, where everyone is tech-savvy, requires to attain databank of words so that they can move ahead with technology and other ones.
On the contrary, deftness in other skills such as writing and speaking can help in constructive way to get good command on overall English abilities, doesn’t gives an extra edge on reading potential though. This is important to realize that an effective speaker with good fluency and pronunciation capabilities may not have understanding of difficult words but still such speaker can showcase his ability in impressive manner. On the similar pattern, writing competencies are linked with grammar structure and some basic vocabulary, henceforth, without grip on lexis as well a writer can be well legitimized. To exemplify, many novel writers and public speakers are very famous due to good writing and speaking style even they don’t possess a strong word bank.
To conclude, expertness in spoken and written abilities definitely gratify one’s abilities to become master of language, nevertheless, to improvise on reading portion vocabulary certainly facilitates effectively.
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On the one hand, when compulsory subjects are banned students have an opportunity to spend time studying their favorite lessons. It can increase their satisfaction of education in university. On the other hand, students can lose control or choose the wrong way of study. For example, in my university sometimes students don’t know which subject to choose because they haven’t decided about their career. Moreover, they can’t change they choice for 2 years, despite that their interests or vision of professional development can be changed.
There is a tendency to make a plan of education for students without their preferences. People want students to study only useful subjects. Honestly, we don’t know what subjects will be useful in future. What is more, when university allow students to learn strict list of subjects it can be harmful for art students and even for the whole science. I think that all scientific breakthroughs were made because of “thinking outside the box”. That is why, universities should give students a chance to develop their creativity and unusual thinking.
Personally, I believe that universities must provide compulsory subjects for studying basic things and a list of elective courses. It helps students to get basic knowledge and to choose their way of education.
To conclude, this is a topic to debate because both views have their pros and cons.
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Recently, with the advances of science and technology, the field of marketing has found new means to reach us. It is quite a debate whether it is an intrusion to a country’s culture or whether it can be considered as a form of education in order to spread new ideas. Personally, I believe, with the modern materialised world which always runs after profit, it is more an intrusion than a form of education.
Different countries have different cultures and traditions. Therefore one unified marketing strategy that is developed in a western country cannot be directly applied to an asian country. For an example in Sir Lanka once there was a beer advertisement which uses a lion, which is a prestiges animal in our country even used in our national flag. Therefore there was a huge public protest against that certain advertisement.
Furthermore, in certain countries they have religious constraints against consumption of alcohol. Therefore, if someone in such a country try to use an advertisement that attracts the young generation towards such habits, it will contradict with their traditions.
Secondly, I do not believe modern marketing has an intention of spreading new ideas or culture. They are vastly driven by the intention of selling their product by any means. I have seen several lawsuits against certain advertisement which went to the extent of making false claims in order to sell their products. For an example energy drinks, food supplements usually use sports personals or celebrity figures in order to convey the idea that they have achieved that state using those products, which can be a false claim under certain scenarios.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that international marketing is more harmful to local cultures than spreading new ideas and the governments should take necessary measures in order to monitor and control these attempts.
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On the one hand, some people think that gaining more vocabulary and studying only from the dictionary could be effective for Android standing. This strategy coma the vocabulary, May extend the range of synonyms and antonyms for the stove consequently , this would facilitate reading articles essays, and magazines.
On the other hand, it is often believed that improving writing and speaking skills ought to be more practical than vocabulary study, and I agree . In the other word, if people learn how to write and speak, it will be easy to get warts and enhance reading because this world may be ambitious , but we can understand these words from the context.
Another reason why improving writing and speaking effective is that would enhance the structures of sentences and learn how words would be integrated in order to form sentences and paragraphs as well . Furthermore , the grammar will be improved simultaneously .
In conclusion , wine people may vary in their opinions , I would rather prefer to focus on developing writing and speaking styles ,this will lead spontaneously to improve vocabulary and cover all the languages aspect eventually.
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Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection Vocabulary knowledge improves by either receptive quality i.e reading or by productiveabilities, is a debatable one. I am of the opinion that by enchancing reading comprehension is the vital path to understand unsual words better. This essay will analyse both views before reaching to a reasoned conclusion.
On one hand, many people asserts that speaking and writing encourage an individual to gain the understanding of different vocabulary better. In other words, it seems to them an essential element to get command on vocabulary,if they produce them in their script and spoken language, which provide them a chance to practice those less common words on regular basis. Recently a study revealed by the Cambridge University that 16% of English vocabulary has been improved over a decade in the U.K by the international students. by frequently usage of their productive effeciencies. Furthermore,it also increase their fluency and writing speed over all. However, I believe this is not a wise way prior reading in context. Therefore, understanding of written script indeed increase vocabulary power.
On the other hand , it is widely recognised that the better and deep understanding of the written script is the sole way to flourish new vocabulary knowledge. By this I mean, if someone reads deeply and with context then there are fair chances to use those vocabulary appropriately. One can not learn those high -level terminologies without receiving them from receptive means ,especially without improving reading comprehension. For instance, a survey by the British Council reading with comprehension improved approximatley 76% of vocabulary knowledge with accuracy in Indian polulation in 2 years time. It proves that the frequent exposure to the written scripts benefit to memorize new vocabulary with context at higher level and in less time.
In conclusion, I am of the view that communication and writing may imrove vocabulary but to use them correctly and appropriately one has to widen their reading resourses and mastering them. Hence ,the authorities should encourage their societies to improve reading comprehension in order to expand their vocabulary knowledge in a right way.
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I am writing this letter to request about the manufacture of custom T-shirt with company logo. Here are the details of our requirement and urgency of this new item for us.
Our company is organizing a marathon related to ‘ clean city clean environment’. In this around 5000 entries we have already registered . This is a way to promote our company. Recently , our executive team decided to distribute T-shirt with company logo. I have attached a document of our requirement details such as different sizes , color and along with quantity in tabular format .
This marathon is on 28th ,March , 2017 and we do need it before 12th, March,2017. I am requesting you to provide a quotation for the above proposal.please send us the quotation details by email or by fax by tomorrow.
If you require any information. Please do not hesitate to ask .
Yours sincerely
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Question:
Communication is less between family members of late. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?
Answer:
I believe that family communication has been disappearing across time. I also strongly believe that technology have changed the way families communicate and relate to each other’s. This essay is going to present strong evidence from experts in the field communication and relationships to demonstrate that although we are technologically connected, families’ ties are getting weaker due to the lack of face to face communication.
On one hand, I believe that communication is the basic element for maintaining relationships and families united. For centuries scientists have been concerned about distances and travels in order to facilitate communication channels at a bigger scale. To our fortune Alexander Graham Bell created the first telephone that allowed us to maintain contact with each other regardless time and distance. As result families became strong units for the first time with a phone by the side of the table.
On the other hand, after the invention of the telephone, the basic model of communication has always required a sender, a channel and a receiver. Nowadays, the receivers and senders do not have time to communicate effectively and the channel is a smart gadget. Communication Psychologists argue that with the inclusion of smart phones and tablets parents are spending 80% of the family time on Facebook, WhatsApp or Instagram. I feel deeply concerned that families nowadays prefer a device than face to face interaction.
From the examples provided it is clear that the communications dynamics is constantly changing. I firmly believe that the new generations are not getting enough communication exposure at home and this is affecting the way we communicate in society.
Question:
Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and imagination than reading.
To what extend do you agree?
Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answers.
Answer:
The development of children’s imagination happens under pleasant activities other than reading. I believe that this statement is true given most experts have stated that kids develop the essential skills throughout games with peers in different environments. This essay is going to discuss both sides using specific information taken from the Canadian Occupational Therapy Association (CAOTA) and recent studies in the field of Children’s Motor development.
First of all, it has been scientifically proven that children learn by association and games. In other words, fun and engaging activities assist them to acquire essential skills such as visual-spatial, motor coordination and communication skills. According to the CAOTA children who do not engage in playground games are at risk of being both physically delayed or impaired. Play is children’s occupation, therefore parents and teachers should create more learning opportunities throughout meaningful games in various environments.
Secondly, although reading is important for communication skills, it could not incorporate any exercises for the gross and fine motor skills. These skills are only acquired by interacting actively with the environment. Recent studies about Children’s Motor Development have recommended to parents to introduce monkey bars, shooter board races, running or jumping within their infants’ regular play time in order to develop core muscles in upper and lower limbs. These activities are essential for other skills such as balance, bilateral coordination, imaginative play and handwriting.
From the evidence provided it could be summarized that pleasant or engaging games are the best strategy to promote learning during the early stages of life. If concerns arise regarding motor deficiencies in children, parents should seek professional advice to tackle these issues.
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Question:
Communication is less between family members of late. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?
Answer:
I believe that family communication has been disappearing across time. I also strongly believe that technology have changed the way families communicate and relate to each other’s. This essay is going to present strong evidence from experts in the field communication and relationships to demonstrate that although we are technologically connected, families’ ties are getting weaker due to the lack of face to face communication.
On one hand, I believe that communication is the basic element for maintaining relationships and families united. For centuries scientists have been concerned about distances and travels in order to facilitate communication channels at a bigger scale. To our fortune Alexander Graham Bell created the first telephone that allowed us to maintain contact with each other regardless time and distance. As result families became strong units for the first time with a phone by the side of the table.
On the other hand, after the invention of the telephone, the basic model of communication has always required a sender, a channel and a receiver. Nowadays, the receivers and senders do not have time to communicate effectively and the channel is a smart gadget. Communication Psychologists argue that with the inclusion of smart phones and tablets parents are spending 80% of the family time on Facebook, WhatsApp or Instagram. I feel deeply concerned that families nowadays prefer a device than face to face interaction.
From the examples provided it is clear that the communications dynamics is constantly changing. I firmly believe that the new generations are not getting enough communication exposure at home and this is affecting the way we communicate in society.
Question:
Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and imagination than reading.
To what extend do you agree?
Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answers.
Answer:
The development of children’s imagination happens under pleasant activities other than reading. I believe that this statement is true given most experts have stated that kids develop the essential skills throughout games with peers in different environments. This essay is going to discuss both sides using specific information taken from the Canadian Occupational Therapy Association (CAOTA) and recent studies in the field of Children’s Motor development.
First of all, it has been scientifically proven that children learn by association and games. In other words, fun and engaging activities assist them to acquire essential skills such as visual-spatial, motor coordination and communication skills. According to the CAOTA children who do not engage in playground games are at risk of being both physically delayed or impaired. Play is children’s occupation, therefore parents and teachers should create more learning opportunities throughout meaningful games in various environments.
Secondly, although reading is important for communication skills, it could not incorporate any exercises for the gross and fine motor skills. These skills are only acquired by interacting actively with the environment. Recent studies about Children’s Motor Development have recommended to parents to introduce monkey bars, shooter board races, running or jumping within their infants’ regular play time in order to develop core muscles in upper and lower limbs. These activities are essential for other skills such as balance, bilateral coordination, imaginative play and handwriting.
From the evidence provided it could be summarized that pleasant or engaging games are the best strategy to promote learning during the early stages of life. If concerns arise regarding motor deficiencies in children, parents should seek professional advice to tackle these issues.
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Question:
Communication is less between family members of late. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?
Answer:
I believe that family communication has been disappearing across time. I also strongly believe that technology have changed the way families communicate and relate to each other’s. This essay is going to present strong evidence from experts in the field communication and relationships to demonstrate that although we are technologically connected, families’ ties are getting weaker due to the lack of face to face communication.
On one hand, I believe that communication is the basic element for maintaining relationships and families united. For centuries scientists have been concerned about distances and travels in order to facilitate communication channels at a bigger scale. To our fortune Alexander Graham Bell created the first telephone that allowed us to maintain contact with each other regardless time and distance. As result families became strong units for the first time with a phone by the side of the table.
On the other hand, after the invention of the telephone, the basic model of communication has always required a sender, a channel and a receiver. Nowadays, the receivers and senders do not have time to communicate effectively and the channel is a smart gadget. Communication Psychologists argue that with the inclusion of smart phones and tablets parents are spending 80% of the family time on Facebook, WhatsApp or Instagram. I feel deeply concerned that families nowadays prefer a device than face to face interaction.
From the examples provided it is clear that the communications dynamics is constantly changing. I firmly believe that the new generations are not getting enough communication exposure at home and this is affecting the way we communicate in society.
Question:
Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and imagination than reading.
To what extend do you agree?
Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answers.
Answer:
The development of children’s imagination happens under pleasant activities other than reading. I believe that this statement is true given most experts have stated that kids develop the essential skills throughout games with peers in different environments. This essay is going to discuss both sides using specific information taken from the Canadian Occupational Therapy Association (CAOTA) and recent studies in the field of Children’s Motor development.
First of all, it has been scientifically proven that children learn by association and games. In other words, fun and engaging activities assist them to acquire essential skills such as visual-spatial, motor coordination and communication skills. According to the CAOTA children who do not engage in playground games are at risk of being both physically delayed or impaired. Play is children’s occupation, therefore parents and teachers should create more learning opportunities throughout meaningful games in various environments.
Secondly, although reading is important for communication skills, it could not incorporate any exercises for the gross and fine motor skills. These skills are only acquired by interacting actively with the environment. Recent studies about Children’s Motor Development have recommended to parents to introduce monkey bars, shooter board races, running or jumping within their infants’ regular play time in order to develop core muscles in upper and lower limbs. These activities are essential for other skills such as balance, bilateral coordination, imaginative play and handwriting.
From the evidence provided it could be summarized that pleasant or engaging games are the best strategy to promote learning during the early stages of life. If concerns arise regarding motor deficiencies in children, parents should seek professional advice to tackle these issues.
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The debate in the perception of individuals over employment has been a contentious issue between opposing sectors in eastern and western society. I believe that switching job at least once is essential in a career development. This essay will discuss the issue and use examples from the nurses in the Philippines and the middle age Americans to demonstrate points and support arguments.
Firstly, the economic rise in the society contradicts the belief of most Filipino conservatives over staying in one job. This is largely because relying in a low compensated job could insufficiently address the increasing demands of basic needs such as shelter and clothing. For example, a recent study in the Philippines showed that over half of the nursing profession has deliberately changed their career to a more highly paid job like call center agents and real estate agents. Therefore, job hopping in response to the increasing cost of living delivers a positive outcome among people.
Secondly, the personality of a working individual could be positively influenced by this switch of employment. This is due to fact that the effect of this new work environment could be an essential factor towards personal growth. For example, researchers from the John Hopkins University revealed that most middle age Americans who switch jobs at least once had a better outlook in life as compared to those who remained in one employment throughout their career. As a consequence, changing work has a certain benefits in an individual’s career.
To conclude, I wholeheartedly believe that staying in one job is an old-fashioned practice, which has now been undermined by a new trend of people switching employment at least once in their career.
The bar graph illustrates the total number of bird flu casualties worldwide in the year 1990 to 2000 according to the World Health Organization archives.
In 1990 and 1991, the WHO initially noted more than 120,000 bird flu cases where it further increased to over 130,000 in the next two years. Subsequently, a continuous rise of casualties had been gathered in the year 1994, 1995, and 1996 with approximately ranging from 140,000, 145,000 and 150,000 respectively.
Meanwhile, the global bird flu had reached its peak to nearly 180,000 cases in 1997, before slightly dropping to about 2,000 to 3,000 and ended with almost 175,000 in the year 2000.
Overall, it can clearly be seen that the bird flu incidents in the WHO data has profoundly increased over the initial 7 years, except for the year 1997 to 2000 were casualties has significantly remained high to a nearly 180,000.
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Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection The bar chart illustrates the lethal cases caused by the global bird flu from 1990 to 2000. Throughout the considered period the disease dramatically spread leading to more than 1.5 million deaths.
First two years of the period the number of casualties were stable at the point of 123 000 deaths. After a slight increase to 132 000 in 1992 the bar chart again stabilized for one year.
Then there was a steady surge in the period from 1994 to 1997. The death number grew from 145 000 in 1994 to 175 000 in 1997. The global bird flu led to 145 000 and 150 000 casualties in 1995 and 1996 respectively.
Although the remained 4 years were quite stable with slight fluctuations, the global bird flu took lives of almost 700 000 people in the last 4-year interval with an annual average number around 175 000.
Overall, the threat of the global bird flu had increased as much as 1.5 times since 1990 to 2000.
Some people believe that employees should stay in the same job for the rest of their lives. Others think they should switch jobs at least once during their career.
To what extent do you agree / disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
For many people a question of career development is one of the most challenging almost throughout the period of living. Whether job hopping is best approach to speed up the way to the top of hierarchical ladder or a simple attempt to escape faced difficulties is a contentious issue. I am a proponent of switching jobs as a means of job security and development. This essay will illustrate internal and external reasons for changing jobs with references to experts’ opinions.
Times when the rule “one job for life” was relevant are over. Nowadays, fast-changing environment creates high level of uncertainty regarding job security. Indeed, the probability to find a stable role in a single company where a person can work for a long period of time is miserable. A report by Hays Recruitment Agency has unveiled that 85% of labour force in Russia have had to change their jobs due to outer forces such as redundancy, low income, bankruptcy of employer. Therefore, there are strong external factors that force people to look at labour market.
In addition to that, there is internal reason. Loved by human resources department expression “to move out comfort zone” demonstrates the necessity of changes in order to evolve. Psychologists insist that new environment demands individuals to adapt forcing them to develop new skills and capabilities. Thus, job hoppers are reported to be stress-resistant and fast adaptive compared to those staying longer in one position.
To conclude, both aforementioned reasons clearly prove that today switching job is necessity. Not only is it the way for self-improvement but also often outside forces demand you to find new job.
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Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection Vocabulary acquisition is sometimes seen as the key area to promote with regards to improving reading comprehension. Others argue that productive skills such as writing and speaking are more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Undoubtedly, an extensive vocabulary entails human expression in all academic and non-academic areas. While some people believe that reading comprehension is the most important factor which can be improved as a result of expanding the lexicon, others argue that writing and speaking are far more critical for social communication. This essay will discuss both views and offer my opinion.
One school of thought believe that understanding texts is crucial in every field, from cooking recipes to building instructions. The more extensive is one’s vocabulary the better understanding of academic texts would have. Numerous studies have found that a well developed lexicon is the base for understanding the entire meaning of a passage. For example, a person with a vast vocabulary would be able to comprehend a scientific explanation of a disease, thus being able to stay informed regarding the topic. Reading comprehension is certainly an area that benefits from an enlarged vocabulary.
In contrast, other people argue that skills like writing and speaking are nowadays particularly important. Writing reports and oral presentations are just two of a large list, where a well developed vocabulary entails success. Research shows that writing requires a vaster knowledge of words, than reading. For instance, a manager would have to write around a million reports and would have quite a fair number of speeches during a career. Obviously, having a large vocabulary, gives the user the opportunity to play with words without repetition.
In conclusion, it is clear that an enlarged lexicon is equally beneficial to readers, writers and speakers. In my view, understanding a reading text is possible without being familiar with all the words, however academic writing and speaking necessitate a well developed vocabulary. Being able to use a variety of words would always be beneficial.
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Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection Some people believe that international marketing could be detrimental to a country. Others claim that it is a fundamental tool in order to educate and spread languages and beliefs. In my opinion, it is bound to delete the different cultures all over the world.
Those who oppose this trend argue that its invasive action has negative consequences for the state in which it is applied. It can be stated that it is an instrument for powerful brands and Nations to overwhelm different and weaker cultures. As a matter of fact, the Western society is slowly conquering the rest of the world through its goods. For instance, firms as Coca-Cola and McDonald’s are opening stores in some of the poorest regions in the globe. These policies not only are encouraging the exploitation of local workers and the damaging of natural sites, but are also increasing the drawbacks of the globalisation. Consumerism is leading to the empowering only of those who can afford such investments.
However, international marketing can bring to the diffusion of other cultures. Sometimes international companies take into account the history and folkloristic peculiarities of the market they are intending to penetrate through their products. A case in point, a great deal of supermarket chains, such as the well-known Walmart, try to sell goods that follow citizens’ lifestyles, according to their culture and religion. Furthermore, the more foreign enterprises open stores in a country, the more aware of their history local people become. The protests against globalisation are the result of numerous people fighting for their common personality.
To conclude, international marketing presents the two faces of a coin: on one hand, it is a valid instrument to diffuse thoughts. On the other, it is a powerful tool possessed by organisations who invade foreign countries through their own culture. From my point of view, it will only have negative results.
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Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection For centuries, the assumption was that to learn a language means to learn its vocabulary. Yet relatively recent findings in linguistics show that language competence is best achieved through actually using it. I believe while there are merits to building up vocabulary knowledge, it is more essential to focus the attention on oral and written production.
On the one hand, lexis is the foundation of any verbal message and should be given importance to. The main reason is that in order to convey a concept one needs to express it with words that are accurately and appropriately chosen, otherwise misunderstandings occur. For example, a salesperson without adequate vocabulary reservoir will probably fail to persuade and convince their potential customers to purchase a certain product. Another reason would be the fact that insufficient vocabulary will prevent a learner from making progress in their studies, in that they may face limitations with the types of the resources they can comprehend.
On the other hand, the ultimate goal of a language is to actually communicate through speaking or writing. Firstly, authentic communication is often carried out even with the most limited lexical range, and both sides of the conversation or written correspondence can manage through the inaccuracies and inappropriacies. Secondly, the confidence required to achieve an acceptable level of fluency is only gained in practice. For instance, a learner can spend hours a day revising textbooks, yet find it frustrating to utter a few sentences. Moreover, language is not a solid entity and is susceptible to constant alterations, therefore engaging one’s self in spoken or written interchange with others makes more sense than trying to acquire words that might not mean the same in the future.
In conclusion, it appears to me that despite the benefits that could be gained from learning vocabulary, learning how to naturally speak or write is far more crucial.
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Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection There has been a long discussion about copyright laws. From my perspective, these rules significantly contribute to rewarding creators such as song writers, and living in fair societies. This essay will explain the reasons behind the argument with examples from Karaoke and YouTube.
Firstly, it is clearly shown that copyright laws help to reward creators when looking at Karaoke industry as an example. It totally makes sense that these companies pay money to these song writers when their songs are sung. According to the report published by Karaoke consortium in Japan, the biggest Karaoke company pay approximately 1 million yen every year to creators in total. As Karaoke companies basically make money by letting their customers sing songs made by song writers, copyright laws obviously contribute to helping creators being properly rewarded.
Secondly, the importance of copyright laws has recently become greater to make society function better due to the recent technology advancement. This is because technology allows people to copy songs more easily than it used to. If there were no copyright laws, songwriters would lose motivation to be creative because their songs would be too easily copied. Take for example, a report YouTube recently published indicated 30% of all videos published last year infringed copyright laws so that they have taken them down. This clearly shows the benefits of the copyright laws to have fair societies.
To conclude, copyrights laws clearly contribute to both rewarding creativity and having fair societies.
Essay 3
The chart illustrates the type of foods (dairy, meat, pulses and vegetables) man in the UK eat in three age groups (0-24, 25-49 and over 50) by percentage of total intake.
In general, there is a popular type of calorie source which makes up the majority of total intake, which is dairy for the age of 0 to 24 (42%), meat for the age of 25 to 49 (50%), and pulses for those older or equals to 50 (65%). On the other hand, vegetables are relatively equally taken by all age groups although the numbers scatter from 20% in the youngest age group to 10% in the oldest age group.
When closely looking at the graph, diary makes up less percentage as people get older which is 42%, 25% and 15% respectively.
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Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection Living in today’s world has changed sundry aspects of people’s lives and one of these areas is related to how the market is moving nowadays. There is a group of people who believe that international marketing leads to several negative effects, while others express their opposition to this idea by arguing that international marketing not only is a cheaper form of education but also this helps to increase innovation , new ideas ,languages as well as culture. This essay will discuss both ideas in detail in order to make an appropriate conclusion.
To some extend a group of people believe that overseas marketing can adversely affect national market, this due to that this practice is considered to be not only invasive but at the same time intrusive. Indeed, a recent study conducted by the university of South Australia has reveled that in the last 5 years the local market has been affected due to the fact that international products are replacing local products .Allied to this, a considerable amount of local companies has been forced to close as a result of the lowest prices offered by international providers. Thus, it is clear that international marketing can produce negative effects to the local market due to its invasive practices.
Therefore, despite of the fact that the international marketing adversely affects some countries, there is support showing that nations need of this practice as this provides a better and most convenient form of education. In fact, recent research by the UN has shown that developing countries now have 50% more access to education materials thanks to the resources which come from overseas. Additionally, there has been an increase of innovations and developments of new ideas as well as interest for different language and culture. Thus, it is clear that international marketing leads to several benefits such as more economical education as well as spreading of ideas , language and culture.
In conclusion, it can be argued that even though international marketing in some cases leads to some disadvantages, this also brings better education as a result of cheaper educational resources coming from other nations. Allied to this, this practice produces the creation of new ideas as well as spread the interest for new languages and culture.
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Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection The issue whether people should stick to same job throughout their life or change at least once has gained importance since last few decades. Globalization had made life easier but expensive that some people face difficulties in making two ends meet. Some people argue that changing job is beneficial while others argue that doing one job is better option This essay will explore both view points with appropriate examples form recent studies for UK government and Harvard University
Some people are precautious, easy going and does not like to add extra stress in life with changing jobs. They opine that staying with one employer entitles them to incentives such as pay rage, longer vocation, easy loans and less probability of laying off. They can progress to managerial jobs by gaining seniority and better understanding of fellow employees and employer. A study by UK government has proven that in recent economic crisis companies retained their senior workforce and laid off newly hired worker. Thus staying with one company is beneficial.
On contrary, there are ambitious and adventurous people who think that they should change job when they feel that they are saturated and not learning new skills anymore. Changing Jobs in earlier stages is instrumental as provides better salary and incentives. Moreover multinational companies hire people with diverse experiences. A study by Harvard University has proven that 75 % of workforce in MNC are highly skilled people from different work environment.
Aforementioned has provided with plausible arguments for both the views. However, I personally feel that one should stick to one job as for as he is getting competitive package and opportunity.
The bar graph illustrates detailed report of World Health Organization of influenza cases in 11 years, that was number of cases per year from 1990 to 2000.
Looking at the graph it becomes clear that it had shown a steady incline of diseased people throughout these 11 years. In 1990 and 1991 only 125,000 people suffered from influenza which increased to 135,000 cases in next two years 1992and 1993. In next three years starting from 1995 influenza increased steadily every year by five thousand and at the end of 1996 there were over 145 thousand cases. Moving further to 1997 when world flu cases increased by 20 thousands and reached the figure of 165 thousands and stabilized there for last three years from 1998 to 2000.
Overall, the bar graph showed an ascending trend of world flu casualities throughout the given period.
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To what extent do you agree?
Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
The global education trend is revitalizing by the introduction of exciting tools and technologies to traditional book-reading methodologies. I strongly believe that a humorous way of teaching is more productive than tedious reading. This essay will demonstrate points and support arguments using examples of gaming consoles and sports as the means of entertainment effectively used in latest education systems.
Firstly, playing on game consoles significantly improves children’s practical skills which are impossible only by reading books. This is because consoles are built with audio-visual materials coupled with motion sensors to improve cognitive abilities. For example, recent studies by Harvard University shows that US students spending daily 2 hours in car racing games on game consoles like PlayStation or Xbox have 65% better results in driving tests than their counterparts who only read driving manuals. Therefore, these simulation techniques are being popular as effective training supplements.
Secondly, sports can play a vital role in teaching ample social skills. This is largely due to the fact that most of the sports are team activities. Take football as an example, all 11 players in the field unite as a team and show their sense of competition against the opponent under the game rules. Consequently, these sportspersons learn invaluable life skills such as team coordination, discipline, and competitiveness.
In conclusion, from above examples and arguments, I firmly agree that fun activities have a better impact on kids’ learning than simply by reading texts. Considering their benefits, the involvement of amusing activities and gaming tools are expected to increase rapidly in the future.
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Communication is less between family members of late. Do you agree or disagree?
To what extent do you agree?
In recent years, social interactions have been highly influenced by modern technologies and working environment. I strongly believe that this phenomenon has a detrimental effect on family communication. This essay will demonstrate points and support arguments in this regard using examples of the impact of social networks and work pressure on working-class families in the US.
Firstly, people are spending most of their free time on electronic devices these days instead of communicating with the people around. This is mainly because the internet is ubiquitous and interesting applications are available to play with. For example, recent reports by CNN showed that more than 70% of US workers are spending their time on social networks such as Facebook, Twitter during leisure time. Therefore, the more people are busy with their mobile phones, the less time they have for their family.
Secondly, middle-class people are struggling to maintain a proper work-life balance in most of the developed economies. This is due to the fact that there are limited opportunities in the labor market which results into a huge competition for available positions. For instance, in 2016 there were 70% more applications registered than the announced vacancies in Amazon. Hence, many people get coerced into working longer hours to satisty their employers’ demand instead of their families.
To conclude, from the above examples and arguments, I firmly believe that family communication has been ruined by excessive use of modern technologies and the chaotic work schedule. In the future, this communication gap in working-class families is suspected to be widened.
(258 words)
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