SNEHAL-GREAT-START

Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection The natural talents of children are devised well when their mind set is free. I believe, joyful tasks can work best for all round development of young minds. This essay will discuss both sides using examples from sports and creative activities to demonstrate points and support argument.
Firstly, scholarly people often believe that reading enhances intelligence, this is clearly not the case, and this is largely because indoor or outdoor games have contributed to systemic and strategic planning. As this is not only going to build their problem solving skills but also to gain appropriate management capacity to confront massive hurdles. For example, recent studies in Howard University indicates that children engaged in playing chess develop more IQ than just reading population. Moreover, badminton improves gross motor skills, hand-eye coordination. Therefore, these physical activities are essential for boosting psychomotor skills and even social attributes.
Secondly, imaginative abilities are born while accomplishment of newer tasks. This is due to the fact that children’s mind are full of enthusiasm, imaginative power and extra boost of invention. So, crafting, painting, drawing will be executed excellently when fresh ideas are implemented. For instance, renowned painter Mr.
M.F.Hussain always creates exquisite paintings, which are popular worldwide. As a consequence, creative tasks are vital in developing cognitive domain and brain storming.
To conclude, from the examples and argument given I believe that, reading should not be the only option for children instead they should be taught that ‘sky is the limit’. And to promote dynamism to their future, enjoyable activities will definately play an important role.

Essay 2- Communication
Communication is the two way process, wherein due to the cooperation of both the sides interaction occurs. I believe that now-a-days families spend less time communicating to each other. This issue has grown significantly due to inception of technology in modern society. This essay will discuss that the interaction between family members have decreased compared to the past, using an example of media and work schedule to demonstrate and support arguments.
Firstly, technology has invented numerous apps for communication. World has come closer, which is just away from a click of a button, it is ironical, this is largely because the real time communication is lost by the usage of electronic gadgets and unlimited internet. For example, smart phones constitutes Facebook, messenger, WhatsApp, all these gives a virtual experience of communication, as various emoticons are used to express emotions. Therefore, instead of a blessing the communication media has become a curse to human being.
Secondly, in this rat race everyone wants to be a winner. This is due to the fact that parents are working long hours in offices. For instance, a survey done in multinational companies indicated that seven out of ten employees unable to spend time with family due to busy office schedules. As a consequence, family members show busy signal to one another by being occupied with work.
To conclude, I believe that the process of communication has stagnated to certain extent from past. It is said that ‘time is a great healer’, so investing real interactive time with loved ones, will surely make a difference to live life worthy.

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