RISHA-IELTS-STAR!-TECH

Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection Technological adaptation is the human intellectual growth. The human brain has created a digital world. In my opinion, despite the tremendous benefits that can be derived from the use of technology, it must not forget that over depending on it has considerably declined human intellectual behavior.

Firstly, the enormous advancement of machines has declined the man power. This is because of the industrialization has accepted machines more as compared to the manual workers. For example, a recent study by human resource departments in the USA showed that nine out of ten employees fail to obtain job due to lack of advanced technological skills. Therefore, the machines are more reliable as compared to the human. As a consequence, human adaptance to technological growth are creating havoc for human survival.

Secondly, the digitization in the modern world is declining the human intellectual function. The reason behind this is that with an over dependence on the technological equipments, people often cannot complete simple tasks independently. For instance, studies by the school organizations in the UK showed that 75 % of children from high school cannot complete tasks without the use of the internet. Therefore, the over use of the computers could reduce the level of intelligence.

To conclude, from the examples and arguments I firmly believe that technology interference is tremendously harming human behavior of thinking. There is a great danger regarding basic intellect. Hopefully in the future the government will recognize both the drawbacks and benefits of technology.

GENERAL TASK 1
Scenario 2: A Job Application Cover Letter
You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are:
1) Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired.
2) Your energy and enthusiasm for the job.
3) Your past experience in a similar position.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to the advert for Chemistry Researcher in jobplus newspaper on 26/01/2017. I pursued my Masters in Chemistry honors from Panjab Univeristy, Chandigarh and also 2 years of valuable experience in the research sector. I have gained competence in several aspects of chemical research.

As a science background, I value the importance of research. I am comfortable with both finding and interpreting molecular data. Both academically and professionally, I thrive in situations that require my intense analysis, problem solving and writing journals. My education for the available position acts as a catalyst and I feel its add a whole new dimension to my thought process.

I feel I can add an asset to your company and at the sometime the position would be the ideal setting in which I could utilize my experience of molecular research and critical thinking skills which you required for the position.

Please find my attached CV along.

Yours sincerely

Risha

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