Fernanda-Good-Work!

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Nowadays people are travelling domestically and internationally and, in most of the time for holidays to relax and have a good moment with family, partner or friends. This essay will discuss travelling using examples from international travel and domestically journey to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
Firstly, for many reasons people are international travelling, this can be because the thickets are cheaper now and easy to pay, in comparison with some years ago. For example, the prices for travel to Europe from countries situated in south America were more expensive in the past and was almost impossible to take this kind of flight. Therefore, the last two years a number of visits in European cities are increasing and people can enjoy and know a new country, culture, and have a sense of adventure.
On the other hand, even costs are lower to travel abroad, some people prefer to take a domestically journey. This is happening because these people feel more safe, and might to choice the best transport such as a car, a bus or an airplane. For example, in Brazil frequently, travel to northern beaches is more expensive than go to another country. Whereas travelers prefer to stay and appreciate their original country.
To conclude from the reasons argued above there are advantages and disadvantages for travelling, but it depends of each person, how could be the destination and how much should spend.

TASK 1 – MAP
The plan illustrate a map of the house, where have four bedroom, activity room, laundry, kitchen, living room, dining room, five bathrooms, storage, and garage.
First of all in lower level with 798 square feet, has a laundry with a bath and a activity room, which is the largest room of the house and in front of that has a bedroom. All of the four bedrooms have almost the same measures, but the bedroom number one has the biggest.
The map shows that the main floor area have 1789 square feet, and in the left side there are three bedrooms and two baths. In opposite at the right side is possible to see next to a kitchen, a small storage and a dining room. A large path is situated behind of the house.
Although this house is such a large house with spacious rooms and good distribution.

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