Vanessa-IELTS-T1-big-improvement!

Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection The line graph shows how many times in millions have overseas residents visited Australia between 1975 and 2005 and the table reveales from where were the visits made.
In 1975 Australia was visited broadly around 10m times. The number of visits through the next decade was 50% higher and rose even faster through the next 10 years to reach roughly 25m in 1995. In the last decade visits continued to rise steady and strong and finished slightly under 30m.
In both 1975 and 2005, the most visitors by far were from Japan and South Korea, together accounted for around two thirds of total number which was 8,8m in 1975 and 30,4m in 2005. Britain was in third place in both years. When summed up, China, USA and Britain made together approximately 1,5m visits in 1975, and by 2005 the number increased to around 5 m.
Overall, visits to Australia gradually increased throughout 3 decades, mostly due to visits from Japan and South Korea.

The bar graph shows the number of mobile phones and land lines per 100 people in Canada, US, Germany, Denmark, UK, Sweden and Italy.
The highest number of mobile phones is in Italy, exactly 90 per 100 people, which is also the maximum on the chart. In Sweden, UK and Denmark there are above 80, while in Germany slightly under 70. Conversely, there are significantly less mobile phones in the USA and Canada, just below 50 and 40, respectively.
Regarding land lines, Denmark is undoubtedly in the first place with almost 90 per 100 people. Second place is shared by the USA and Sweden with little under 70. Canada, Germany and the UK follow with roughly around 60 each, while Italy has the least number of land lines, slightly over 40.
Overall, there are more mobile phones than land lines in selected countries. This is especially noticeable in Italy where are twice as much mobile phones.

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