Maria-F-IELTS-STAR-Doing-GREAT!

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar graph shows the changes in diet and calories of UK males in three different age groups and life periods. Analysed groups are aged 0-24, 25-49 and over 50. Different kind of sources are considered: dairy, meat, pulses and vegetables.
It is possible to observe a predominant consumption of dairy products in the 0-24 group, which reached over 40%. Whereas, the 25-49 group shows an increase of preference for meat around 50%, the over 50 group shows, on the contrary, a significant use of pulses which is around 65%. It can be seen the difference between the use of pulses in people aged over 50, which is dramatically increased, in contrast with the 10% of pulses consumed by people aged 25-49.

Overall, each group have a tendency to one predominant source. Pulses were the preferred option for the over 50 group, with meat and dairy following ad most consumed between the young groups.

Do copyright laws limit creativity or reward it? Would society function better without such rules and regulations? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience.

Firstly, there is ample evidence that copyright is necessary to legally protect a personal work or new and valuable creations. Specifically, copyright is well known as prevention in the case that other people would produce copies of a specific work without owner’s consent. Consequences for a copyright infringement are important and regulated by the law. Therefore, to protect something by patent is considered an extremely valuable decision. It is also important in order to preserve them in the time and space. For instance, recent research from Harvard has shown that masterpieces protected by copyright have more chance to become famous because people can relate the work to a specific person.

Secondly, even if this practice could limit creativity, it must not be forgotten that to declare a property is actually the only way to protect relevant works, especially in the artistic community. This is due to the fact that in the present society, much importance has been given to art and creativity. Consequently, there is an impressive production of new works every year. For example, research conducted from The American Artistic Society has shown that the production of new creations protected by copyright has increased of 40% compared to last ten years.
In my opinion, the artistic sector needs to be preserved because it is expression of human roots and history. Despite this, nowadays it is considered an official guarantee to preserve all people’s intellectual rights and works.

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