HANG-IELTS-STAR!-T2!!!

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Interpersonal communication in small imitate groups such as families is an effective way to enhance the relationship between family members, however, I have to admit that there is a decline of communication. Here are my points and examples to demonstrate what I said.
Addicted to the Internet, through devices such as mobile phones, tablets, and laptops, these become the first choice rather than face-to-face communication. Convenience as it is, adults are accustomed to keeping connection with others by their electronic devices. For example, the family gathering is less attractive than before, most of us make a priority to send a message or make telephone calls instead of having a traditional family gathering. Occupied with building relationship with others through their mobile phones, adults often ignore what the elder said during the dinner. Consequently, e-devices steal quality family time.
Additionally, more and more working parents spend the majority of their time on working in the office even working overtime at home. When parents want to obtain an advantageous position in the stiff competition, they have no choice but to devote themselves to work at the cost of communicating with their children. For instance, children are sent to boarding school and often only go home once a month. Therefore, less communication causes a sense of isolation between parents and children.
To conclude, Internet addiction and working pressure discourage us to communicate with each other. Considering a father or mother is an important role to play, workers are responsible for balance work and life for families and all of us will benefit from communication between family members.

Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and imaginations than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

It is common that giving much more emphasis in reading rather than doing an enjoyable activity. I totally agree that an enjoyable activity prepares children to be a good member of a society. Here are the points to demonstrate what I said.

Reading has numerous benefits, but playing on game consoles can develop skills that could not be developed just by reading alone. This is because through playing on games consoles, children can develop spatial awareness, cognitive that impossible to develop just reading. For example, a recent study from Harvard suggests that students play 2 hours a week on consoles outperforms the ordinary by 20% in the psychometric task. Therefore, the advantages of playing on game consoles are clear and give an opportunity to a child to progress in the air rather than just reading.

Secondly, just reading may be stood at academic basis rather than the whole things. Because of physical activities, especially the sports, introduce new dynamics such as competition. Take for an example, introduces students to do some activities, like hiking or playing basketball can help them develop a good habit that will continue into their adulthood. Kobe, James and other NBA athletes all start their training from an early age. Therefore, it is necessary to give emphasis on physical education to explore student’s potential in some competitive fields.

To conclude, a balanced education system, need to incorporate various activities rather than just reading, which will benefit the lifestyle of young people. Consequently, it will promote students health and well-being and practice their skills in many aspects

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