Maria-F-Doing-Good!!!!!!

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Words: 150

The bargraph shows the changes in diet and calories of UK males in tree distinct age groups, referring to different sources and four food groups.
Analysed groups are aged 0-24, 25-49 and over 50. It is possible to observe a predominant consumption of dairy products in the 0-24 group, which reached over 40%, while the other food sources are less preferred in the same group, with a proportion of 18 and 20% for each.
Whereas, the 25-49 group shows an increase of preference for meat around 50%, the consumption of pulses in the over 50 group was the higher figure on the chart, which is around 65%. On the contrary, vegetables were not the favoured of any age groups.

Overall, each group has a tendency to one predominant source; meat and dairy were the most consumed between the young groups, with pulses as preferred option for the over 50 group.

Words: 150

The bar graph shows the changes in expected city visits for 2018.
Analysed groups are USA, Canada and Mexico. Cities of destination are London, Paris, Madrid and Istanbul. Whereas, Paris and London will be the most preferred destinations with a presence of USA visitors around 100% and 80% respectively, the same cities seem to be the not the favoured from Mexico visitors which will prefer Madrid as best destination around 65%.
Also, Madrid will be less favourite by the Canada group with a percentage around 30%. On the contrary, Istanbul seems to be the most interesting city for Canadians with a rate around 70%. It is also possible to observe that London and Istanbul will have the lower percentage of visitors from Mexico, with a 20% each.

Overall, each group seems to have a tendency to one predominant source, with Paris, Istanbul and Madrid as most visited city for each group.

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