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The bar chart shows the British men’s total intake in different age groups from four various food sources namely dairy, meat, pulses and vegetables.
In age group of 0-24, highest percentage of dairy products are eaten which constitutes to just over 40%. Meat and vegetables intake is half of it. Pulses being a least source of intake which makes up to just less than 20%.
Meat is most popular in mid age (25-49) compared to other sources of dairy, pulses and vegetables which accounts to approximately 25%, 10% and 15% respectively. The intake of vegetables are only 10%, which is lowest of all sources during last life periods of over 50. Pulses are over six times more popular than vegetables, being a maximum source of intake. There is a difference of 5% in dairy and meat intake.
Overall, vegetables are not popular in any life periods, whereas every age group has its own choice of preference to eat.

Essay – Copyright law

Copyright law protects the original work of the creators. I believe, amendment of such laws in society is crucial, because some people want to make easy buck off another person’s labour. This essay will discuss that the patent laws help in development of pirated free environment by using examples of creative incentive and patent infringement to demonstrate and support arguments.
Firstly, copyright is the federal law which promotes artistic expressions by giving authors exclusive rights for a limited period of time. This is largely because it protects almost any medium of creative work, including literature, music, drama, sculptures, graphics, sound recordings and architectural works. For example, a copyright holder in America gets up to 95 years of protection, which provides incentive for the owners to create. Therefore, a creator can make a great profit, along with making sequels of the first product.
Secondly, the copyright law allows society to benefit from new ideas and information. Also, the authority of sells, advertisement in in total favour of the owner. This is due to the fact that the patent laws does not allow to copy the original work. Moreover, it decreases redundancy leading to more productive work. For instance, the charge for copyright infringement in U.S.A. is up to $30,000 or more. As a consequence, the authenticity of the real work is secured under the section of this law.
To conclude, I believe that the copyright law must exist for the smooth and systematic functioning of the society. Perhaps, this law is not only going to create the legendary work by great artists but also to motivate amateurs.

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