Carlos-IELTS

Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection TASK 2

These days, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Collocations:
waste disposal
extremely harmful
changing patterns
widespread flooding
hectic pace
to safeguard interests
to allocate resources
to address issues
to make a plea
draconian measures
to foster development
a torrential downpour
an acute shortage
lightning-fast change
to replenish resources
widespread skepticism
a (financial) rescue package

The issue of pollution in large cities has grown in importance since the number of consumers has increased, resulting from over populated cities generating more air pollution and wasting. Solution to this has been the recent line of thought but it must be forgotten that environmental measures in this matter also a viable option. This essay will illustrate pollution problems affect us and how it can be faced.

On the 21st century, society has become more consumerism as before, creating more factories producing environmental threats even more in big cities, the facilities to obtain their goods is much easier, for instant prior shipping a property implies machinery to build it, this needs fuel to operate exhausting fumes emitting detrimental gas polluted the air. Therefore if human population increases, we are also producing even greater quantities of waste such as plastic, cleaner products, batteries and so on, which contaminate the earth and polluted rivers and oceans.

On the other Hand, government and non-governmental entities concerning and analyzing a solution of this problem a lightning-fast change to the companies to develop an eco-friendly factories. For example, instead of using gasoline or coal energy replacing by solar or wind energy to minimize the air pollution in metropolitan areas. Furthermore, as individuals educating about a waste disposal producing pollution on earth, to prevent this, adapting a recycling to reduce source materials and contamination. Currently measures shows government promoting a rescue package to companies who change for a friendly environment and individuals a large sum of discount in their bills.

To conclude, although pollution is hard to eradicate especially in large cities but can be controlled by educating people.

TASK 1 GENERAL

You are looking for summer job. Write a letter to an employer.
-introduce yourself
-explain what type of job you like
-explain your previous experiences and related skills

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or madam,

I am writing to apply for a summer jobs offered by your agency.

My Name is Carlos Moreno I am 32 years old, student of the University of Canberra currently coursing last year of business.

I would like to apply sort of job related to Hospitality as my major will be in that area therefore, would be beneficial for me to get an insight of the area before ending my career.
In my previous workplaces I started working as a kitchen hand a Lebot restaurant close to my University for a few months until I got a part-time job in Luxor Hotel in Canberra CBD working there as a bartender and barista. I consider myself reliable, team player and quick-learner. As I am still in studying my availability is from the 2nd of December until the 25th of February.

Please find attached my resume for more personal information. If you have any question about myself please do not hesitate to contact me as your convenience.

Thanks in advance for your kindly response,

Kindest Regards,
Carlos M.

The post Carlos-IELTS appeared first on IELTS ESSAY CORRECTION.