IELTS-ESSAY-SAJANI-AWESOME-T2

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There is no doubt that copyright laws have been brought into action to protect the original work of a founder. This is because the originality and the creativity should be encouraged to enhance creativity, instead of letting imposters using others’ work and making it their own. For example, a recent study by South Korean film directors showed, if there were no legislations on copyright system, around 70% of their movies would be of same stories. Thus, this law helps in maintaining the original idea and fortifies creativity.
Furthermore, regulations on the copyright system ensure a peaceful and fraternal environment among the creators of any work. As they are always solicitous about their own work and if they know that they are well protected by the laws of copyright, they would maintain a collegial relationship with their competitors. In the USA, for instance, a famous author’s novel was used by another author and this infringement of copyright laws had caused a massive resentment in the whole literature society during the 1980s. Hence, this rule should be maintained for societal benefits.
To conclude, laws for protecting individuality not only reward the producer but also, maintain peace in the society. in broader aspect and hence, this should continue to be implemented in coming future as well.
TASK 1:
The bar chart depicts the data about the dietary sources of energy for males of different age groups in the UK.
In terms of below 24 years age group, the dairy product was the main source of calories at around 42% of total intake, which was almost double the amount of meat(20%), pulses(about 18%) and vegetables(20%) intake. On the other hand, the amount got almost halved at around 22% for the men of 25 to 49 years of age. Men of this age group relied on meat, which was 50% of total intake. However, the amount of vegetables and pulses consumed was at 15% and 10% of the total consumption, respectively.
Regarding the eldest age group, intake of pulses was 65% of total intake, which was almost thrice as much as intake of meat (20%) and six times more than that of vegetables (10%). Consumption of dairy product was at 15% of total dietary intake in males aged 50 or more.
Overall, it is clearly seen that three different variety of foods were popular in three different age groups of the male in the UK. While pulse was the highest taken food for energy for males above 50 years, it was considerably low for the middle age group.

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