Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection Nowadays there are more and more advertisements. Some people think that they have a negative influence on people, and therefore should be restricted do you agree or dis agree?
Nowadays, there is ongoing debate among people about advertisements. Some people believe that advertisements have negative impact on people’s life and therefore should be stopped. However, my actual observation of life has led me to disagree with them. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
First of all, advertisements educate people and expand people’s knowledge. From advertisements, people hear about new products, which can provide a great solution for their daily life activity. My unpretentious opinion was echoed by Naomi Miller, Chairwoman of the education department at Hunter University. In an article that she published, professor Miller describes a study of 181 families, some of which watched advertisements, while others did not. The result of the study showed a 95% increase in productivity in the first group because the participants used new products that were invented to improve productivity in some daily life activities such as a dishwasher.
Admittedly, despite all the reasonable evidence on the contrary, some people argue that advertisements influence people negatively and therefore should be restricted.
Firstly, they claim that some advertisements market fake products. Then, there are concerns about the consequences of using fake products, although their argument appears to be somewhat convincing and stands to reason. However, such position should be taken with a grain of salt because when advantages and disadvantages of advertisements are carefully compared, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
In conclusion, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that without advertisements we would not know what is new in markets and what are the new innovations on our planet. That’s why I would strongly recommend advertising and disagree with their restriction.
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