Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection The issue of securing a stable lifetime job versus choosing a job hopping path has been extremely controversial in the last decades.Since the job market is becoming more competitive and tight I believe that holding a secure job may be the most rewarding choice in the long term.
Due to the economical and financial instability that has affected the international labour market in the last years, employees that have a safe position should hold it. Having a secure job in such a critical historical period allows workers to conduct a life free of stress such as low mood disorders, depression and anxiety created by a continuous condition of uncertainty. A recent study conducted by the Sorbonne University of Paris has proved that workers with a stable employment will have 40% less risk to suffer from a dysthymic disorder. Consequently, having a job related stability it is beneficial on several aspects of everyday life most importantly on aspects such as a mental health and wellbeing.
On the other hand, job hopping exposes the employees to maximize their creativity through different working realities, it expands their knowledge in multiple fields and it enlarges their horizons. For instance the Danish Goverment every year provide substantial benefits to workers that have changed more than two jobs in ten years, this reward specifically promotes job motility in every sector. Therefore, even if switching a job every few years may create uncertainty about the future, it incentivates workers to master new skills and to reinvent themselves.
To conclude, I believe that in this specific historical moment, employees should secure their positions. In order to avoid financial and economical uncertainty that may affect their physical and mental health. It is predicted that in the next ten years the international labour market will be recovering creating a wider combination of job opportunities more suitable to job hopping.
task 1:
The graph presents the world bird flu mortality rates in the timespan between 1990 and 2000. The data are provided by the World Health Organization.
At first glance it is visible that the number of casualties due to bird flu has been progressively escalating between 1990 and 1996, and then in the next 4 years the mortality numbers have levelled off.
In 1990 more than 120,000 victims were caused by the disease and in
the next six years the mortality has reached more than 140000 cases. From 1997 to the 2000 the trend remained the same with approximately 160000 human beings deceased due to the epidemic.
To summarize, the mortality cases due to the avian influence have increasingly augmented in the 10 years taken into consideration. In particular from 1990 to 1996 the number of victims has expanded while from 1997 to 2000 the mortality number remained unchanged.
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