VANESSA-G-TEST-TIME

Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection The pie chart shows the number of FIFA World cup wins for eight different countries.
Brazil won the cup 5 times, the maximum number on the chart. Italy is just behind with 4 wins and Germany is in the third place with 3. Uruguay and Spain have the same number of wins, at 2, while France, England and Argentina won the cup only once.
Brazil accounts for one fourth of the total win count, almost the same as Italy with just one win less. Germany and Argentina together also make for another fourth. Uruguay,France,England and Spain have the least number of wins; all their wins together account for the final fourth of the total.
Overall, it is clear that Brazil leads in FIFA World cup wins but Italy and Germany are very close to take the prime position. France, England and Argentina are for now too far behind to represent a threat to the leading position.

The line graph shows alcohol consumption in the UK between 1976 and 2011, described in litres per capita.
In 1976 alcohol consumption was at 9.3litres per capita. Seven years later consumption was slightly lower, at 9 L, which was the smallest amount of the whole period. After another seven years, in 1990 , it went up again and surpassed the initial amount , reaching 9.6 litres.
In 1983, when consumption was at its lowest it started to increase gradually to reach 9.6 L in 1990, 10 L in 1997 and its maximum of 11.6 L in 2004. The period finished in 2011 with alcohol consumption dropping again to 10L. Range from its lowest and its highest was 2.6 litres per head.
Overall, although the alcohol consumption in the UK was stable larger part of the period, all in all it has increased after a more erratic pattern through the end of the period.

The bar graph shows Kickstarter Campaign success rates by nine categories.
Graphically, one can observe that categories on the left have higher success rates than those on the left. Dance with 68% has the highest success rate. Music is not that far away with 54%, followed by Art, at 46%. All the remaining activities have success rates below 40%.
Design,Food,Crafts and Journalism all have success rates between 30 and 36 percent, Design having the highest and Journalism the lowest. Technology and Fashion are at the bottom with 28 and 27 percent, respectively. Difference between the highest and the lowest success rate is around 40 percent; Dance at the top has more than twice as much higher rate than Fashion at the bottom.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that the “arts” categories have the highest success rates, while all the other categories are very similar in terms of success rates.

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