ESSAY-CORRECTION-CARLOS

Essay Corrections available at http://www.ieltswritingtask.net/ https://www.facebook.com/IeltsWritingTask-205577652822039/ https://www.youtube.com/c/ieltsessaycorrection Society has been benefited by the increasing production levels of companies in order to satisfy the needs of its inhabitants, albeit at a cost in the earth pollution. With a city population increases, the damage also intensifies, the reasons and how can this be solved are outlined below.

The causes for the increase in pollution, specifically in large cities are the increase in consumerism. People are demanding more due to an increase in their needs. Also, an overpopulation can be found in metropolitan areas due to everybody needs to work. For example, studies by Cambridge University identifies that around 75% of the jobs are centralised in large cities like London, Tokyo, Paris. Therefore, causes of the increasing in contamination are in direct relation to an improved quality of life.

Considering the solutions, companies can be awarded by government and consumers by showing their contamination levels. Investing in electric buses and cycleways for commuters will dramatically reduce indices of air pollution, also by considering to share a ride with a workmate. Furthermore, the government might incentive companies by placing factories outside of main cities. For instance, in Norway and Finland, most of the factories are located outside of their main cities thanks to government initiatives. Therefore, environmental practices can be done by companies, government and individuals with the aim to reduce pollution.

To conclude, although the increase in production and overpopulation is necessary bad, there are still actions that can minimise the damage to the environment.

TASK 1 GENERAL

You are looking for summer job. Write a letter to an employer.
-introduce yourself
-explain what type of job you like
-explain your previous experiences and related skills

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for a summer job offered by your agency.

My Name is Carlos Moreno I am 32 years old, a student of the University of Canberra currently in my last year.

I would like to apply sort of job related to Hospitality as my major will be in that area, therefore it would be beneficial for me to get an insight of the area before ending my career.
In my previous workplaces I started working as a kitchen hand a Lebot restaurant close to my University for a few months until I got a part-time job in Luxor Hotel in Canberra CBD working there as a bartender and barista. I consider myself reliable, team player and quick-learner. As I am still
studying my availability is from the 2nd of December until the 25th of February.

Please find attached my resume for more personal information. If you have any question about myself please do not hesitate to contact me as your convenience.

Thanks in advance for your kind response,

Kindest Regards,

Carlos M.

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