ESSAY-IELTS-KIM-TECHNOLOGY-AWESOME!!!!!

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I am writing in response to the advertisement for a Software Engineer, in Jobs Plus newspaper 01/01/2017. With a Bachelor’s degree in Computer Science and hands-on experience using Artificial Intelligence to implement an intelligent personal assistant will meet and exceed the expectations for the role.

In the latest project, I created a human voice detection algorithm which analyzed data 200% faster than the previous version. Aside from the projects at work, I have been working on various speech recognition algorithms by joining a school project. I believe that my data manipulation skills will contribute to the success of your new project.

You will find me to be an enthusiastic and trustworthy engineer who pursues perfection and alternative paths.

Enclosed is my resume which provides a more in-depth view of my qualifications and expertise as a Software Engineer. I look forward to speaking with you about this opportunity.

Yours sincerely,
James

GENERAL TASK 2

Should humans adapt to technology or should technology adapt to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The issues of technology adaptation have grown in importance since technology has dominated the world and been a part of our lives. Despites the significant benefits that technology provides, it must not be forgotten that the dependency on technology can have detrimental effects on human intelligence. In this essay, both issues will be discussed with examples to demonstrate points and prove arguments.

On the one hand, humans should adapt to technology. This is because that technology has changed culture and the way of life. Recent studies from Harvard showed that 98 percent of adults in the United States have at least one email address and 95 percent of them consider email as their main communication method. Regardless of preference between email and post office mail, people are required to get accustomed to email to communicate efficiently.

On the other hand, there is no doubt that human memory skills can decline as the dependency of technology has increased considerably.

Since technology allows people to complete their tasks without utilizing their brains, people do not need to develop their intellectual skills and their abilities deteriorate accordingly.

Neuroscientists at MIT showed that only 10% of people in Canada remembered their parent’s phone number in 2013 while 80% of people recalled their parent’s phone number in 2000. Digital dependence results in digital amnesia.

To summarize, humans need to adapt to technology to survive. However, they should recognize the downsides that can be derived from the high reliance on technology to maintain the intellectual capacity of humans.

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