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The table shows the amount of visitors to the Ashdown Museum in a
specific year.
Below it the left pie chart provides information on
the satisfaction level the visitor had the year before refurbishment
of the museum, while on the right side the graph depicts the
satisfaction level after the renovation of it.
It is clearly visible that the number of visitors to the Ashdown
Museum has significantly increased, from
over 70,000 visitors to more than 90,000 after the refurbishment.
The pie chart on the left indicates that before the renovation half of
the visitors were dissasfied and very dissatisfied with almost 40
percent of museum lovers very enthusiastic about it. Conversely, the
year after the renovation the largest part of visitors (at around 75%)
was more than satisfied about the improvements done the museum.
Overall the museum’s visit have augmented of almost 20,000 units after
the refurbishment and also the satisfaction of the visitors has
largely increased.
The bar chart provides information abut the number of passengers that
were using three different airports of NY city: La Guardia, JF Kennedy
and Newark. Data is given for the period of time between 1995 and
2000.
From left to right, the airport that had the highest number of
visitors was La Guardia. Starting at around 35 millions of visitors
in 1995 and constantly progressing reaching almost the double of them
in 2000. The second most popular airport has been JF Kennedy with 25%
of travelers in 1995, the number then has moderately fluctuated over
the given years and has reached just over 45% in 2000.
The least busy airport has been Newark: in the first given year
only 15 millions used the facility and in the next four years the
travelers increased reaching a peak in 1998 ( at round 40
million), then, the number of travelers remained stable at the same
level also in 1999 and 2000.
Overall La Guardia has been the busiest airport among the three, followed by JFK and Newark.
The table provides information about different types of leisure
activities performed by 6,800 Scots. People are divided un three age
categories (16-24/25-44/45-74) and the total amount of participants
over 16 years of age is given.
From left to right, It is visible that among your adults (16-24)
visual arts are the most popular form of cultural activity (30%)
while computer based activities are the least favorite. For the second
age group (25-44) undertaking any type of crafting is the most
popular activity at 22 percent while writing has the lowest point
percentage with 6%
For the 45+age group, once again crafting has the highest percentage
and both writing and computer based activities the lowest rates.
Looking at the all age groups (16 and over) any performance such as singing,
dancing, playing music, has the lovers largest percentage while
computer is once again at the bottom of the preferences.
Overall, the most popular recreational activities performed by Scots
are crafting, visual arts and singing/ dancing. Conversely, computers
and writing are not significantly popular.
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