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TECHNOLOGY ESSAY:
The issue of whether modern day technology is getting the upper hand over human or not has grown in importance over the past few years. In my opinion, as the inventor of any advancement, we should utilize this boon according to our benefits without getting overly dependent on it. This essay will discuss this issue by using examples of cutting edge inventions and our over-reliance on mechanization to demonstrate points and support arguments.
The question of human adaptation to growing technology seems to be of absolutely no significance and it is the technology that should get modified or adjusted according to human need. This is because it is on our hand how we want the appliances to be to satisfy our requirements. For example, with the growing time, kitchen stoves have been getting altered from being a simple burner to an ultra modern electric stove. Therefore, human beings have the privilege to achieving and enjoying things the way they want.
However, nowadays, high-tech devices has led us to become highly dependent on them more than ever before. In spite of enjoying these luxurious devices,it is often making us neglect our own capability in most situations. For instance, highly intuitive spelling check software is helping us by correcting our spellings while writing online, which is, in turn making our brains dull enough to actually memorize the meaning of the words. Hence, is can be said that advancement in technology is leading us towards ignorance.
To conclude, although there are multitudinous benefits that we get from scientific advancement, it should not be given much importance that this eventually affects our intellectuality and identity as human beings.
BAR CHART-2:
The bar chart illustrates the information about the anticipated visits by Mexican, Canadian and Americans citizens to four different cities in 2018.
For the residents of Mexico, Madrid is expected to be the most desired destination having above 60 thousand visits in 2018, which is almost three times greater than the visits to London, Paris, and Istanbul. In contrast, Istanbul probably will be attracting the highest number of Canadian tourists, around 70 thousand per year, followed by 50, 45 and 30 thousand visits to London, Paris, and Madrid respectively.
Regarding the data on USA citizens, Paris will be the highest visited city in 2018 with 100 thousand visitors yearly, other cities will expect less than 80 thousand travellers from the USA.
Overall, it is clear that residents of Mexico, USA and Canada have different preferences in terms of travelling to other cities. However, Americans are hoped to travel more than other two nationalities.
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