VLAD-IELTS-STAR!

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The issue of the technology in our society has grown in importance over the past few decades. On one hand inventions make our life easier, but on the other hand, there are some negative aspects which also have to be mentioned. This essay will discuss both sides, using examples from the education system to demonstrate points and support arguments.
Firstly, there is no doubt that technology devices assist us in numerous tasks, but it takes more and more time for learning how to use those tools. This is because along with progress in science, the technology also becomes more complicated. For example, recent research from Harvard indicates that in the USA more than 40% of educational programs are related to the information technologies. Therefore it is obvious that people have to spend a tremendous amount of effort to adapt to new technology.
Secondly, it should be mentioned that overusing of the technology might reduce person’s mind capability. This is due to the fact that nowadays we prefer to delegate memorizing of information to electronic devices. For instance, according to recent research, the majority of university students in Tokyo do not see the reason to remember historical facts, because of their belief that an answer to any question can be found online via smartphone. Thus, depending on high-tech devices could negatively affect people’s intelligence.
To conclude, I firmly believe that humankind has to review the implementation of the technology, as it is predicted that in the future new scientific discoveries will influence our life much stronger.

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