IELTS-ESSAY-CORRECTION-VAIDYA

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The issue of content regulation has grown in importance since the inception of government bodies into managing such matters. I believe, impact of such laws on society is significant but copyright infringement can be demotivating. In this essay,I will analyse such argument,take examples from creativity and education support to rationalize my stand.

Firstly, there are some evidences that content legislation can prohibit creativity. This is because, other people can not view created content. Moreover, re-create something from scratch will take time which society may not appreciate due to changing trend. For instance, a research study from Hollywood film industry has proved that 50% of film producers have tried to drag away themselves owing to long time and fast changing trend. Therefore, it is clear that if copyright laws not executed properly, it would have discouraged artistic creativity of a substantial group of people.

Secondly, a privacy law directly affects literacy level of a country. This due to the fact that people in developing country can not have free access to read some knowledge sharing books which affect person’s intellectual skills. Take for example a recent study which proved that literacy level in Canada increased from 60% to 80% in 1984 when Canadian government amended this law in a positive way. Therefore, it is clear that if there is no content lagistion It would help a country to increase its literacy ratio.

To conclude, although strict control of such law is a demand requested by content owner. I believe that this law not only restrict creativity but also diminish educational opportunities.

R0 Letter-1
A formal apology and explanation you have received a letter from your university of Albion, demanding a reason for your absence from an exam.

Apology for the situation.
Identification for yourself – Name , Student number , Case Number
An explanation of what had happened and any possible of evidence you may have
Possible resolution to consider

Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to express my gesture of apology due to my absence on exam day. I am Bhautik Vaidya,enrolled in your university of Albion with student number:123456 and case number:7890.

Actually on exam day,I faced stomachache which was unbearable.Due to this,Emergency line had been called by me than I transferred to the city hospital. and lastly operated as my appendix ruptured.

Moreover, I was unable to attend an important exam of my career nor can submit any evidence.Thus,I have endorsed medical documents stating information of my case.

I hope you can empathize with my situation. Thus, I would be grateful, if you could retake my test. , if I can be permitted to attend my missed exam with upcoming practical exam of same subject. Kindly accept my request and help me so that I can come out from such an inevitable situation of mine.

I look forward a positive hearing from you.

Sincerely yours

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